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    First Date

    Mercy
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    Post by Mercy Mon Nov 14, 2011 11:23 pm

    Forgive me
    If my thoughts seem too fast or jumbled.

    But when you smile at me,
    I get butterflies and become
    Strangely poetic.

    Although I’m not a poet,
    I am just an observer,
    with a pen and paper in hand
    trying to capture moments,

    I’ve spent nights bent over in bed,
    ink spilled over the page
    plagiarizing what I have heard over late afternoon coffee
    and nights under the stars

    because I have yet to experience the beauty of silence

    I have yet to understand what epiphanies are

    Trying to understand you,
    what do you think your mothers face was like
    when you were placed in her arms and she held you
    because the picture you keep in your pocket has worn and creased.

    I want to know what your first word was,
    hear your thoughts about life,
    tumble like water over rocks.

    What makes you stay awake at night,
    out of excitement,
    out of fear…

    I want to hear what you think about love,
    why does it happen,
    do you believe in fate?

    As we wake on the edge of winter
    long legs stretch across days into the unknown.

    Does it scare you?
    not knowing what to expect next
    what might happen to you
    tomorrow,
    or even tonight,

    When I drop you off at your door
    and ask for a kiss?


    Last edited by Mercy on Tue Nov 15, 2011 10:11 am; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : Update)
    Alix Labe
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    Post by Alix Labe Tue Nov 15, 2011 7:46 am

    i liked that. it was pretty
    Mercy
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    Post by Mercy Tue Nov 15, 2011 10:10 am

    thank you Smile
    Al THLDI
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    Post by Al THLDI Wed Nov 16, 2011 7:20 pm

    You already know which was my favorite part Smile
    Eljordo
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    Post by Eljordo Wed Nov 16, 2011 9:02 pm

    That was actually really good Smile
    Mercy
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    Post by Mercy Wed Nov 16, 2011 9:15 pm

    Thank you Elj Smile that means a lot

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