by Guest Wed Mar 16, 2011 5:25 pmOkay! This is a one of a couple of songs that I made a couple of months ago, and I would really like it if I got some feedback on how I should fix it and if it was good or not! 
PS: This is a rough draft, so it probably isn't that good!
GETTING OVER YOU:
It's a nice day and there's not a cloud in the sky,
and just as I begin to say that we should make another try ,
my friends don't like him,
And I'll show you just how wrong you are.
I sat alone and played guitar,
You are my shooting star
I remember the time we got caught in the rain,
Lying in my bed again..
I would lie and say i'm over you,
Goodbye to everything I thought I knew,
There's little hope,
Baby you will find.
I sat alone and played guitar,
Down comes the reign of the telephone car,
I remember the time we got caught in the rain,
Why should I complain?
PS: This is a rough draft, so it probably isn't that good!
GETTING OVER YOU:
It's a nice day and there's not a cloud in the sky,
and just as I begin to say that we should make another try ,
my friends don't like him,
And I'll show you just how wrong you are.
I sat alone and played guitar,
You are my shooting star
I remember the time we got caught in the rain,
Lying in my bed again..
I would lie and say i'm over you,
Goodbye to everything I thought I knew,
There's little hope,
Baby you will find.
I sat alone and played guitar,
Down comes the reign of the telephone car,
I remember the time we got caught in the rain,
Why should I complain?
