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    Alexis
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    Post by Alexis Tue Mar 22, 2011 7:41 pm

    The monsters in the house moved at night,

    Only pour Katie could hear them, alone with her fright.

    Her mummy and daddy were always asleep,

    When the beasts awoke and made the floorboards creak.

    Shivering on her bed, hidden between the sheets

    The air still and cold, there is silence, and she peeks.

    The noises start, the cries the screams!

    Goblins and bone-eaters, there were more than just dreams!

    They had come to take her, to eat her alive,

    To be gnawed on and torn with no hope to survive.

    She screamed, silent and lost in the deafening roar

    Claws, hands, tentacles grabbed as she wept “please no more!”

    Her bed was behind and her fate near ahead

    There was no doubt that she would soon be dead

    Such horrid faces what would-could they do?

    Her stomach sank as she saw a boiling human stew.

    The cold dank cell began to spin

    As little Katie was tossed right in!

    Her small pink body began to boil

    Eyes wide, kicking and screaming in turmoil

    But soon again she was back in her bed,

    No- I could not have been all in her head!

    They were still there, they all were

    Evil demons of the night, always watching her

    Katie soon began to weep,

    Though she did her best to try and sleep.

    Her mother and morning came the next day,

    And chased those nasty monsters away.

    But it was too late, and there little Katie’s body lay still

    A hole made in a mother’s heart, one impossible to fill.
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    Post by Jade Hawk Tue Mar 22, 2011 8:00 pm

    WOAH creepy! Got job I'm not reading this at night...

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    Post by Guest Wed Mar 23, 2011 12:48 am

    O.O JADE!!
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
    Hmm creepy cool KUDOS
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    Post by Adolpho Fri Jun 10, 2011 7:24 pm

    Woah, nice work. Didn't expect the ending, but I liked it. Teeth
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    Post by Faith Wynters Fri Jun 10, 2011 10:30 pm

    Damnit T_T i liked it...It was amazin...Now...it's night-time *Checks under bed* I'm a little creeped now
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    Post by Allen Sat Jun 11, 2011 12:46 am

    Meh. It's... a poem. But it's not very unsettling. I'm more frightened of my mirror tbh.

    Did you write it yourself Lexi?
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    Post by Alexis Sat Jun 11, 2011 2:12 pm

    Thank you everyone for all the comments, it wasn’t really meant to be scary, serious, or even polished, hence the title. But yeah, I did write it myself.

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